Thursday, March 10, 2011
to be or not to be a banana!
Hmmm, in the early eighteenth century, there was a great cow named sir Kyle. This great cow who produced only the finest milk had a wife named princess laya. Sir Kyle had been worried for many days on weather or not laya was sleeping with other cows. One day sir Kyle's mother, or the mad cow came over to Kyle one day and told him tht she had Seen Laya with six other cows in the barn next to the owners house. Sir Kyle did not believe his mother. Then on one night sir Kyle woke up from the dream he had of giving chocolate milk instaed of regular milk. He was verry sad. He went out of his barn because he did not see laya and found her with 6 other young strong cows. They divorced three months later when she was shipped off to wal-mart. So the morale of the story is, trust your family instead of your significant other unless it it something small for example: like getting a bag of chips or doing the dishes. thank you for reading this post, and have a good day
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Kyle! This is a horrible story. I dont know where u were going with this but it didn't work. It did not answer the question. You are not supposed to put your name in the reponse.
ReplyDeleteP.S. You're so creative Kyle!
-Da Pope
HAHAHAHA.Well, I can say that I do agree here. I would also agree that you should in fact trust your family, but you should also trust your significant other to a certain extent. A significant other should earn your respect and keep it. As far as this story goes, I have no idea were you were going with this..
ReplyDeleteDear Kyle, you mispelled very. You also made constant capitalization errors. Your entry was horrible and needs alot more bananas. That title is completely misleading.
ReplyDeleteI think you have a good point here. Kyle was very trusting in Laya but in the end he should have listened to his family because they were right, but I can see how Kyle would have wanted to trust Laya more and now believe she was really with six other sronger cows. Maybe he was just halucinationg though, he had just woken up from a very scary dream.
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ReplyDeleteI personally loved your post. I liked how you turned it into a story and had fun with the blog. You did answer the question you just put your own little twist on it. I am very happy and proud of your work (:
Special_K <3333 (: (: <333
Dear kyle, This story was so amazing. It opened my eyes to a new world. Then when I thought about it a little more it showed that you need help. It did not make sense at all to the question.
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HAHAHA very nice story, I think that you could have answeredthe question a lot better. But I guess fr you this is good enough. I am also sorry your story was not a very happy ending for Sir Kyle the cow. But I am also again not sure if that was the way to go when writig this "story" of yours. But whatever works for you.
ReplyDeleteKyle, this story makes absolute perfect sense to me. I have had similiar, unique things happen to me like this that I can reference too. You're grammar is all not there either Sir Kyle. It is spelled instead, not instaed, and you must cap. L on laya.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story, how did you come up with a master piece like this? The morale of this stroy is very true. I think it could be better but, job well done!
ReplyDeleteKyle! This is a horrible story. I dont know where u were going with this but it didn't work. It did not answer the question. You are not supposed to put your name in the reponse.
ReplyDelete-Bieber Fever
Now I will write my own comment. Kyle, you need help, you haven't liked Star Wars in so long. Plus there is a bunch of cows, no bananas in this. You're a liar, straight up. I'm very sorry.
ReplyDelete-Da Pope
I did not like this story in anyway. It was not relevant to the question in anyway. You also put your name in it and that is unacceptable. You should use a better choice of words
ReplyDeleteThis post presents the author's brilliance as well as it exercises his ability to focus on the topic in the subtlest manner, amazing. The creatitivity rivals the great works of Dr. Suess and is harmonized with the flow of Dr. Dre. It had me on the edge of my seat during the whole read. And, the author ends it with a statement of the theme discussing the constant rivalry between family and friends. The author's morales are expressed subtley, in such a way that can be compared to Edgar Allen Poe and Mark Twain. Our children, and their children, will learn from the author, whoever he may be.
ReplyDeleteI rather enjoyed how you show that family can be more trusted by having the mother cow tell Sir Kyle that his wife has been cheating on him. However I feel that you could've elaborated on the story to better explain the family trust aspect, as what you have now is a little short. Maybe have the mother cow and Sir Kyle get into an argument and then Sir Kyle goes and finds his wife cheating on him instead of just a quick setence saying he didn't believe her. Still, I admire your creative approach to stating your opinion.
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